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Title: Red eye fly
Post by: Jahshiyah on May 11, 2005, 09:28:19 AM

Steped out side,red eye fly.
Grand mother moon shine, guide InI.
Hard toe shoes stumble,
past blue moon tree roots.
Lost feet inna dem big boots,
conscience steps of naked toes
touch she earth with free up soles
red eye fly, neck bent high
grand mother moon shine guide ini


Title: Re: Red eye fly
Post by: preach on May 11, 2005, 03:00:19 PM
That's some fly s****. Your poem flows beautifully and effortless. Keep riddin the riddim.


















Title: Re: Red eye fly
Post by: Jahshiyah on May 16, 2005, 11:09:30 AM
Give tanx for the big up,and give tanx to the most high for word, sound,and power.
Jahshiyah